short story writing

The Haunted Woodlands!

In a nice small sized village there lived a girl called Sammy and her best friend Bella. Sammy had a yorkshire terrier named Lulu. It was a good day in the village. The girls wanted to go for a walk so they could go looking for a rare butterfly that only comes out once a year. They were very excited! It was around 10:00 am when they left. When they were walking they took a wrong turn into the woods. They started walking towards a delicious smell. ¨Cake, chocolate, cheesecake! What is it?¨ Yelled Bella.  As they walked they saw a tiny kitten in a little box. ¨Look there is a kitten¨ Sammy said to Bella. In the box it had a bag of cookies and a note. ¨What does the note say¨ Bella yelled at Sammy. Bella looked and it said The person who finds this note is very special. I have left this kitten to grow up in your hands. Her name is up to you and I hope you you love the kitten with all your heart. She will need someone to be very close to her because you are the only family she has right now.  They looked around and didn't see anything. ¨What should we do? Mum would not let me have her¨ said Bella. ¨Well when we get home she can life with me¨ Sammy said as she picked up the box with the kitten in it. They looked around and they realized they were lost. It was about 12:00 am now and they started to get worried. ¨What should we call the kitten¨? Sammy said. ¨We have other things to worry about right now¨ Bella yelled at Sammy! ¨Well we can not keep calling it kitten so it´s name can be Tilly¨ Sammy said. It started raining and they ran to find shelter for the afternoon. They fell asleep and they got taken to a bad person's house. The people introduce themselves and a little kid came up and said that they would be slaves. So he handed them a key to escape later in the day. When no one was around Bella reminded Sammy she had her phone with her in her pocket. Sammy text her family then the bad people came back out and saw the phone. The message was already sent so he couldn't do anything to stop it. They went away again and the girls unlocked the cage to get away. As they got out the owners went to get them. When and managed to catch them the police and their parents came to collect them. The people went to jail and they went home with their parents and both of the animals. The other kids got sent to a caring place to life until they were older. They all lived happy ever after, well not all of them the bad people went to jail.